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A Broken Heart Chap. 1 by ~GaaraRocks101:iconGaaraRocks101:



It was a beautiful day in Konoha. The birds were singing, the flowers were blooming. The perfect season; Spring. And one happy, loud mouth ninja was walking home from a successful mission. His name was Naruto Uzumaki. He had blonde hair that would rival the sun and beautiful blue eyes that look like the sky or the bluest of the seas. 

Naruto was so happy to be back home with his dark-haired lover. Just thinking about him makes him dazed with love. He couldn’t wait! What should he do? A romantic dinner? A walk around Konoha? Love making? That thought made the blonde giggle with excitement.

Naruto was up at the front door of his and Sasuke’s apartment. His hands were shaking from excitement and from not seeing his lover, Sasuke, for so long. Will he still love him? Think that he’s still sexy?

Naruto unlocked the door and walked into the house, but paused at the doorway. Now that he thought of it, the house was dark; inside and out. Probably no one was at home, but he should check if Sasuke was home just in case. 

“Sasuke?” He called out as he walked towards the direction of the kitchen, but Sasuke wasn‘t there. Naruto gave up searching for Sasuke and walked down the hallway towards the bathroom. Halfway into the bathroom, he stopped in his steps when he heard noises coming from somewhere. He waited quietly for the noise to come back. He wasn't disappointed. Moments later, the sounds returned and they sounded a lot like moaning. 

The sounds were coming from his shared bedroom with Sasuke. Quietly, he walked down the hallway, heading towards the room. He stood in front of the closed bedroom door, and gently grasping the knob, he opened it. 

When the door was fully opened, Naruto eyes were as wide as dinner plates. Right there, on their bed, was Sasuke and Sakura making out. Naruto was speechless. At first he was going to laugh and say it was a dream, but it couldn’t be a dream. It felt so real. His hand went up his arm and he pinched himself to see if it was real. It did hurt. That could only mean that Sasuke was cheating on him with Sakura. 

“S-Sasuke?” Sasuke broke the kiss and looked up from where he heard his name being called. When he saw Naruto standing at the doorway with tears in his eyes, he jumped right out of the bed, causing Sakura to fall off the bed. 

“What the hell?” Sakura yelled. She got off the floor and turned to glare at Sasuke. She stopped glaring at Sasuke when she saw how pale Sasuke looked and how big Sasuke’s eyes were. She slowly turned around only to see Naruto at the door. She gasped. Slowly putting her hands up in defense, she whispered, “N-Naruto, this isn’t what it looks like.” 

Naruto started to laugh at that statement. “Really? Because it looks like he was fucking your mouth with his tongue.”

Sakura flinched. She had never seen Naruto that mad or ever heard him talk to her that way before, “Naruto-!”

“Sakura, leave. Now!” Sasuke said. He didn’t even give her a glance since his eyes were looking into Naruto‘s eyes. 

Sakura squealed at Sasuke’s tone of voice. She left the apartment as fast as she could. She didn’t like an angry Naruto, but sure as hell didn’t like a pissed off Sasuke.

When Sakura left, Sasuke and Naruto haven’t left the spots where they were standing. They both were having a staring contest with one another until Naruto broke the contest. Each one was wondering what was going through the others mind and who would say what first.

Sasuke finally broke the silence. “So… how was the mission?”

Naruto sucked his teeth together, “What type of question is that when I see my boyfriend making out with my best friend?” Naruto said walking out of the bedroom. Sasuke ran after Naruto and grabbed Naruto’s arm in a firm grip. 

“Where the hell do you think you’re going?” Sasuke asked with a glare. 

Naruto looked at Sasuke‘s hand that was holding on to him and looked up at the other. “Leaving, duh. What should I do, Sasuke? Stay here and pretend nothing happen? No thanks. I’m leaving,” Naruto said, getting out of Sasuke’s hold. 

Sasuke growled and grabbed Naruto. He walked into the bedroom where he and Sakura were and tossed Naruto onto the bed. He climbed on top of Naruto and started to giving him kisses and nipping Naruto’s neck. He stopped and whispered harshly into the blonde's ears. “You’re not going anywhere,” Sasuke growled. 

Naruto's eyes went wide with shock. He tried to push Sasuke off, but that didn’t work. He started to cry again, “Sasuke…? Sasuke, get off! Get the fuck off!” Naruto kicked the raven in the gut. When Sasuke fell off the bed, Naruto ran out of the room. He was half way to the front door until Sasuke grabbed a hold of the blonde's waist.

“Do I have to repeat myself? Where. The. Hell. Are. You. Going?” Sasuke snapped, his Sharingan activated and spinning with rage.

“Sasuke! You’re seriously hurting me! Get off!” Naruto yelled, tears trailing down his cheeks and he whimpered when Sasuke didn’t let go. He turned around to face the dark-haired male and looked in his eyes, “Please, Sasuke, let me go.”  

Sasuke looked in Naruto’s eyes and sighed. He needed to stop himself before he regret any of his actions towards Naruto. He tried to wipe the blonde's tears away, but that only made Naruto growl and knocked Sasuke’s hands away from his face. 

Naruto got out of Sasuke‘s hold on him and asked in a subdued tone. “Do you love me, Sasuke?” 

Sasuke glared at Naruto, “What kind of question is that?”

Naruto looked at Sasuke in shock. He was too shock to say anything. ‘What kind of question is that?’ It was a simple question! It was either he loves him or he doesn’t. “Sasuke, you know what I damn well mean! Do you or do you not love me?” Naruto asked, glaring with anger. 

Sasuke just stood there. He finally broke the silence and started to laugh. He was laughing so hard that he sounded like a crazed man. 

“What the hell is so funny, teme?!” Naruto yelled, he needed to know. He needed to know if Sasuke really loves him or not.

Sasuke finally stop laughing and looked at Naruto, “Do you want me to lie?” he asked with a blank face.

Naruto gasped. He was surprised Sasuke would say that. Tears trailed down his cheeks. “No…” he finally said, the sound of sobs finally coming out of his mouth. 

“Then no. I don’t love you.” Sasuke said.

Naruto started shaking. He was trying to keep himself up from falling, so he grabbed a hold of Sasuke’s shirt. He was gripping the shirt until his hands were pale white. Sasuke took Naruto’s hands and peeled them off his shirt. He didn’t want his shirt wrinkled all because of a dobe.

“Sasuke…” Naruto head shot up and glared at Sasuke. He finally had the guts to say, “Get out.”

Sasuke made no move from his spot, making the blonde even more pissed with the fact that he wasn't going to leave. If Sasuke doesn’t love him, then why doesn’t he leave and act like nothing had ever happened before?

“Did you not hear me? I said get the fuck out!” Naruto screamed. Sasuke shrugged. Opening the door, he stepped out and left without a word.

When Sasuke left, Naruto slumped onto the floor and sobbed silently. He couldn’t understand why no one would give him the time of day or even show that they cared. His friends do, but that wasn’t enough! He wanted someone to love him and not use him for just his body. Someone to see him for who he really is.

‘I guess it just prove that no one would ever love a demon like me,’ Naruto thought. ‘Maybe I should kill myself?’ he thought bitterly. Nah, his friends would miss him… well, not all of his friends.

Naruto sighed and got off the floor. Just because Sasuke didn’t love him doesn’t mean that he shouldn’t try to find someone else. Naruto smiled at that thought. But then, that smile soon turned into a frown once he thought of all the good times that he and Sasuke had shared before this incident. All the times when he and Sasuke would go eat ramen and train together. On all those times when Sasuke would take him out on dates and get him cute gifts. 

But that was all in the past.

Naruto sighed and grabbed his keys. “I guess I’ll go out to eat.” He stepped out into the corridor and let the door close silently behind him.
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Author's Comments

So... you know when I said I would replace 'A Broken Heart'? Well, I redid it! :boogie: I thinks its actually good this time. :D But don't be surprise if the paragraphs aren't right or if I put the comas in the right places. Btw, if I do, please tell me how to be a better writer and what I could do to be better. ^^

And to the people who don't like yaoi or SasuNaru, if you don't like don't read. If you don't like it, than why are you on it? Any who, thanks for reading. :waving:

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I'm trying to fave it a million times but DA won't let me. D:

I think i'm in love with this story.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :w00t: You did an awesome job!

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Peter Griffin: Oh gawd, the monkeys took over my brain. Everyone stay calm, I got this...
Everyone: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!
Alexis: WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!
:icongaararocks101:
Wow, thanks. *blush* I can't believe you liked it. I thought it would suck ass. Thanks. ^^ I'll work on the next chapter tomorrow... if I don't have ton of homework. =__="

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Hi PEOPLEZ!!
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I think I might remember the first story you wrote... but this is really good ^-^
A few spelling and grammatical errors, but other than that I love this :heart:

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{Why is it that only really small candy bars are called “fun size”? Like you can't have fun with a regular-sized candy bar?! “Whoo let's get this party going!” “No wait guys, I can't...my candy bar is too big...”}
:iconxsasoxdeix:
1.) Not, liked. LOVEd it. I'll even marry the story but i don't think that's illegal. ^.^;;
2.) It's no where near sucking ass. It's Awesome OwO. Simply Awesome....like "Simply Tobi."

And...

3.) Damn you, homework. D<

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Peter Griffin: Oh gawd, the monkeys took over my brain. Everyone stay calm, I got this...
Everyone: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!
Alexis: WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!
:icongaararocks101:
Really?! :iconiloveyouplz: You like it? That means so much to me!! :iconnewglomp:

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Hi PEOPLEZ!!
:icongaararocks101:
LOLz, thats taking things a little too far but that means a lot to me.... LOLz, "I'll even marry the story but I don't think that's illegal." :XD: LOLz, that is funny. ;p

LOLz, i do like "Simply Tobi" So cute. X3

Homework should die and go to hell like snakies should. :p Snakies and homework is EVIL~! :cries:

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Hi PEOPLEZ!!
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I definitely DEFINITELY love this ~!

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{Why is it that only really small candy bars are called “fun size”? Like you can't have fun with a regular-sized candy bar?! “Whoo let's get this party going!” “No wait guys, I can't...my candy bar is too big...”}
:icongaararocks101:
Why thank you~! :glomp: That makes me feel so special. :D

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Hi PEOPLEZ!!
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You are special! :o
:hug:

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{Why is it that only really small candy bars are called “fun size”? Like you can't have fun with a regular-sized candy bar?! “Whoo let's get this party going!” “No wait guys, I can't...my candy bar is too big...”}
:icongaararocks101:
... Is that a good thing? LOLz :XD:

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Hi PEOPLEZ!!

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